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And Dave is a Word Nazi about the Word Nazi

Thanks to everyone who chimed in on my video sales letter. You've given me PHEMONIAL advice on a sales video.

• No more robo announcer voice (replaced by me)

• Cut the testimonials in almost half and made each one shorter

• Put the shorter testimonials up front to keep the momentum going.

• The flying words have been replaced with less jarring images, and they don'…